IELTS Writing Sample

Advantage and Disadvantage Question

Dec 05 2023

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Here is the answer

Sample Answer

Taking risks is indeed an integral part of growth – both in ones professional and personal life. While risk-taking can bring great rewards, there is also the possibility of failure, loss, and uncertainty.

On the plus side, taking a risk and stepping out of one’s comfort zone can create opportunities that had not existed so far. Making the best of such opportunities can be incredibly rewarding. In addition to that, risks can foster new ideas and breakthroughs. In your professional life, these can set you apart as a champion. In the personal sphere, making the best of opportunities can be a source of great personal pride and satisfaction.

However, it always pays to be aware of the risks. If the ploy fails, one must be ready to face financial, emotional, and even physical discomfort. All of which can lead to stress and anxiety. These can take a heavy toll and, in some cases, lead to chronic depression.

Whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages depends on several factors, such as the individual’s risk tolerance, the context of the situation, and the potential impact of the outcomes. Some people may thrive in uncertain situations, while others prefer stability and predictability.

Ultimately, it’s about finding a balance that aligns with one’s values and goals. Calculated risks—those that are thought through and where potential consequences are considered—tend to be more beneficial than impulsive decisions. It’s also important to learn from both the successes and failures that come from taking risks.

Examiner Response

  • All the requirements of the task are fully and appropriately satisfied. 
  • The message can be followed effortlessly and Paragraphing is skilfully managed. 
  • A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features.  
  • A variety of structures have been used with full flexibility and control.

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